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#Animation #Comedy #Drama

By Justin Spiegel

A student at a Tier 1 university discovers that he can monetize his intelligence by running an underground tutoring service.

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1 Reviews | 26 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 11

#drama #comedy #coming of age #absurd

Elliott wakes up the morning after his first frat party with no memory of what happened, but eventually discovers he was helping students with their homework while blackout drunk. He and his best friend Tim decide to set up a tutoring service at their university.

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Fun Concept That Doesn't Line Up With The Story

You have a great concept which means you have a strong foundation. You should reshape your story to make the relationship between Ana and Elliot a B-plot, with the tutoring service being the A-plot and the driving force of the humor.
I wish you the best of luck on future drafts.

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