Elliott wakes up the morning after his first frat party with no memory of what happened, but eventually discovers he was helping students with their homework while blackout drunk. He and his best friend Tim decide to set up a tutoring service at their university.
You have a great concept which means you have a strong foundation. You should reshape your story to make the relationship between Ana and Elliot a B-plot, with the tutoring service being the A-plot and the driving force of the humor.
I wish you the best of luck on future drafts.
When an Italian-American deli owner learns his ancestral castle has been overtaken by an evil Frog King, he assembles a ragtag team—including his alien wife and genetically-modified cat-man friend—to reclaim his heritage and uncover a hidden treasure.
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