1. Concept - The concept isn't original really, but there's a ton of different ways this concept can be used and changed. However, this story went more basic.
2. Story - The story was very hard to follow along with unfortunately, mainly due to the fact that the formatting and dialogue were out of place and not done properly.
3. Structure - Some of the formatting was decent, like the action lines. Par...
In an alternate timeline of WW1, six German soldiers are trapped in the trenches near Cairo, where they must wait for help as they fight off against the psychotic Ottoman soldiers doing anything they can to make the Germans suffer.
Based on the true story in 1931 of a navy wife who claimed she was raped by a gang of Hawaiians, leading to one of them being kidnapped and murdered in a scheme hatched by the girl's mother. Clarence Darrow defended the family in Hawaii's Crime of the Century.
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