World War Time feature

Here were my thoughts on your script:

1. Concept - The concept isn't original really, but there's a ton of different ways this concept can be used and changed. However, this story went more basic.

2. Story - The story was very hard to follow along with unfortunately, mainly due to the fact that the formatting and dialogue were out of place and not done properly.

3. Structure - Some of the formatting was decent, like the action lines. Par...