This is a fun start to this script! It's a fun twist on the St Nick trope. The idea that this preacher is out trying to convert folks by breaking into their homes in the middle of the night is clever and fun. I think the level of him being drunk through all of this could come into play in other fun ways, maybe with the cops joking about it or him almost having an accident with the Uhaul guys before they steal his truck. You've got a solid base to...
**THIS IS A SKIT WRITTEN FOR A CONTEST UNDER A STRICT 2 PAGE REQUIREMENT. PLEASE DO NOT INCLUDE FEEDBACK ABOUT LENGTH IN YOUR REVIEW, AND KEEP THE MEDIUM IN MIND.** A man from the future must save an important target
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