Soon to retire newspaper magnate, Charles Carling is excited to have his darling daughter join his company until an attorney shows up, accusing his firm of sexual harassment. Things take a dark turn when he finds out who is behind this ghastly lawsuit.
things I enjoyed, and little notes that I believe might improve the story.
-Your dialogue is good. Character react and respond to eachother believably, and no one seems to drag on or monologue for too long.
-Pg. 6. I like how Charles withdraws his plate of cookies after Marta reveals that she's there...