
Quite Beautiful
short
Everyone is telling him to look at the moon. Every instinct tells him not to.
Approved

Nominee
Draft #1
Draft #1
1 Reviews |
5 pages |
1 year ago
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Draft 1
Summary
Everyone is telling him to look at the moon. Every instinct tells him not to.
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Here were my thoughts on your script:
1. Concept - It's very strange to see a short script about people who look at the moon suddenly vanish into the sky. I like how it was similar to the apocalypse subgenre for horror, although it feels more fitting for thrillers.
2. Story - I liked the story mainly for its simplicity. It seems like you had fun writing this script and it goes to show that you don't have to have a crazy or complex story for...
1. Concept - It's very strange to see a short script about people who look at the moon suddenly vanish into the sky. I like how it was similar to the apocalypse subgenre for horror, although it feels more fitting for thrillers.
2. Story - I liked the story mainly for its simplicity. It seems like you had fun writing this script and it goes to show that you don't have to have a crazy or complex story for...
1 year ago
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