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#Sci-Fi/Fantasy #Action/Adventure #Family

James Jones is a kid whose life and adventures are imaginatively interesting.

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1 Reviews | 54 pages | 10 months ago | Draft 1
Being a kid with Asperger's Syndrome, James Jones can have a huge and sometimes scary imagination, which he uses to understand and escape reality sometimes....

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Overall, this story needs more work to improve, but it isn't impossible. There is always room for revision and enhancement.

SCORE BREAKDOWN:

A. By the fundamental elements:

Concept: Poor
Story: Poor
Structure: Poor
Character development: Poor
Dialogue: Fair

Overall: Poor

B. By mistakes (in no particular order):

Initial points: 10/10

1. Swear words: – 0.5 points (minus 0.5 points)
2. Formatting faults: – 0.25 points
3. U...

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