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#Drama #Sci-Fi/Fantasy #Comedy

By Elijah Cassidy

An agoraphobic man finds a space helmet which seems to get rid of the things he fears, only for him to become dependent on wearing the helmet.

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1 Reviews | 13 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 1

#mental health #Anxiety ##suspense ##dramedy ##psychological

A young man is plagued by constant noise in his head, and fear of the noise rising prevents him from going outside. But when a space helmet mysteriously turns up on his door step, it takes away all that noise and seems to cure his affliction, until he takes it off and finds the noise worse that ever. Now he must find a way to navigate this new issue.

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Well done, just needs some tweaking

As mentioned before, the big thing is just making sure to make your motifs and themes crystal clear, at least if they revolve around major plot points. There are some spelling and grammatical errors but just go back and read your work carefully and you should be able to spot those, or else you could just run a proofreading program on the computer to make sure that things are right. Also, it is worth mentioning that this script does not necessaril...

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