Simon is a true story, based on a closeted bisexual man's journey in his marriage. A real life look at the struggles and risks of being closeted and the fear of coming out.
Concept: While the concept has been explored a couple of times, I think it’s really done well in this short.
Story: There’s definitely something going on here with Simon’s hookups and guilt. The internal conflict is clearly evident. However, there is no real resolution to this conflict that just lingers. The part of the story that you have already written is really good. I just feel like it’s cut a little short and the story could go further...
After discovering an insane asylum psychiatrist is administering electro-shock treatments to patients for sexual gratification, an idealistic social worker puts her job and life on the line to stop him before her beloved patients are shocked to death.
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