Tooth Ferē feature
#Animation #Family #Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When a tooth skips processing in an attempt to get home, he sets off a dangerous chain of events that threatens to destroy the entire Fairy Realm unless the Tooth Fairy can find and process the tooth before it's too late.
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1 Reviews |
95 pages |
1 year ago
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Draft 5
The Human Realm has fallen victim to a new virus affecting children’s teeth. Without children’s teeth, there would be no Tooth Fairy. Faye, the Tooth Fairy’s daughter has her opinions about her mother’s work and how much time she spent away but will ultimately have to put their differences aside to save the Fairy Realm when a tooth decides he doesn’t want to go through the processing which sets off a chain events.
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The concept is outstanding, although a little strange. The structure is nearly perfect. The characters perform well. The dialogue is a little too long but still satisfactory. And the story is exceptional; it's the best story I've reviewed so far. However, and please forgive me when I say this, the story still somewhat sucks. The characters' beliefs aren't clear; that might confuse the reader. Some pieces of information in the story are never show...
Wow! What a concept! The story keeps you engaged till the very end. It even leaves you wanting for more.
The fairy realm, even though an imaginary world, is described in a way that makes it easy for the reader to understand. Everything about the realm, starting from the names of cities like Toothville, to names of the pubs, cafes, to description of Toothville when Faye first enters it is commendable. Clearly shows how much effort the writer ha...
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The ending feels a bit rushed, it almost seems like the story is given a bad ending where the villains truly won, yet the climax of the script is basically a dentist appointment with Faye being forced to sacrifice her teeth to "stabilize the fairy realm", when in reality, the climax is Faye getting her wisdom teeth removed. The family drama between Faye and her parents over the new therapy office Faye seems to open seems like a good place to buil...
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