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By Lilwen Meyer-Dinkgrafe

Can you really escape your past?

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A father and daughter flee an abusive household, never sure whether they'll truly be free.

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When a dad chooses his own and daughters safety, he must muster the strength and money to do what's right for both of them.

Good Day, I hope this finds you well. Normally I do my reviews in a specific order but this one is different so I shall review in the same order as I read your Script. I hope none of my critiques are too harsh and all will help yourself and your script in the future. BLUR: Starting with reversed domestic violence is a very intriguing hook, well done. Pg. 6- 'shocks'- 'shakes'?- 'shocking'? Pg. 8- Jade is an interesting Character I think you can d...

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