Good Day, I hope this finds you well. Normally I do my reviews in a specific order but this one is different so I shall review in the same order as I read your Script. I hope none of my critiques are too harsh and all will help yourself and your script in the future. BLUR: Starting with reversed domestic violence is a very intriguing hook, well done. Pg. 6- 'shocks'- 'shakes'?- 'shocking'? Pg. 8- Jade is an interesting Character I think you can d...
Teenage Claire Hasley, a sufferer of social anxiety, faces her worst fears in the town of Fairfax, where a once buried malevolence quietly consumes the townspeople and plays out their societal roles.
Unlucky Lloyd" follows a hapless ex-convict who can't catch a break, but when he's unwillingly dragged back into the criminal underworld, he must navigate a series of comedic and dangerous misadventures to clear his name and find a fresh start.
After the racially-charged death of their best friend is dismissed by local authorities, two teens begin a descent into their town’s dark history—unraveling a hidden cult-like network, disturbing rituals, and a Corruption so deep it fractures their sense of reality.
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