Good Day, I hope this finds you well. Normally I do my reviews in a specific order but this one is different so I shall review in the same order as I read your Script. I hope none of my critiques are too harsh and all will help yourself and your script in the future. BLUR: Starting with reversed domestic violence is a very intriguing hook, well done. Pg. 6- 'shocks'- 'shakes'?- 'shocking'? Pg. 8- Jade is an interesting Character I think you can d...
The forbidden yet magnetic connection between Luma, a New Human “Learner” and Kinesis, a Transhuman “Minor”, contains the potential to either spark an inter-species war or propel the world forward into a glorious new beginning
When one high king insults another, the fealty of a family is tested as a boy becomes a man, a woman grapples with abandonment and a son tries to keep them all together.
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