A young man and his friends find themselves in a fight for survival when an alien experiment crash lands on Earth and regenerates strange and ferocious creatures from their bones and oil.
It's a fine start, but I feel like your story is missing a couple of key ingredients:
1) The concept is fine, but flawed in some key ways. Unless you're an established writer, no one is going to want to make a high-budget monster disaster movie. It'll be too expensive. These movies tend to be heavy on spectacle, light on substance, and there's nothing wrong with that, but in order to get your foot in the door, you'll need to write a story that...
When a small Arizona town is plagued by a series of horrific murders and sightings of a strange creature lurking in the forest, a former UFO hunter turned rookie cop reunites with her former crew to investigate the murders and uncover the truth before more lives are lost.
When a tooth skips processing in an attempt to get home, he sets off a dangerous chain of events that threatens to destroy the entire fairy realm unless the the Tooth Fairy can retrieve the tooth before it's too late.
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