A young man and his friends find themselves in a fight for survival when an alien experiment crash lands on Earth and regenerates strange and ferocious creatures from their bones and oil.
It's a fine start, but I feel like your story is missing a couple of key ingredients:
1) The concept is fine, but flawed in some key ways. Unless you're an established writer, no one is going to want to make a high-budget monster disaster movie. It'll be too expensive. These movies tend to be heavy on spectacle, light on substance, and there's nothing wrong with that, but in order to get your foot in the door, you'll need to write a story that...
A disillusioned priest with a military past must protect our species from a living strain of crude oil that seeks to infect the citizens of Lakewood Alaska, the pipeline, and the world.
When the government pushes the wrong buttons of its citizens, they retaliate by voting someone new into office. This is the story of the new prime minister, how she got there, and the crap that she went through in order to succeed.
A traumatised ex-soldier, awakes stranded on a space station with six strangers, their memories wiped, orbiting a star about to explode in a deadly supernova. To escape, he must unravel a dark mystery in a frantic race against time.
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