A young man and his friends find themselves in a fight for survival when an alien experiment crash lands on Earth and regenerates strange and ferocious creatures from their bones and oil.
It's a fine start, but I feel like your story is missing a couple of key ingredients:
1) The concept is fine, but flawed in some key ways. Unless you're an established writer, no one is going to want to make a high-budget monster disaster movie. It'll be too expensive. These movies tend to be heavy on spectacle, light on substance, and there's nothing wrong with that, but in order to get your foot in the door, you'll need to write a story that...
In order to prevent Imperialism from dominating the world, a united group of colorful elite travel back in time, risking everything to rewrite history and save humanity from the current reality.
It is 1945. Ripped from this world, hurled into a alien hell scape, a young American soldier must survive a deadly contest against a desperate Japanese enemy in a life and death race to reach a device that can send him home.
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