A young man and his friends find themselves in a fight for survival when an alien experiment crash lands on Earth and regenerates strange and ferocious creatures from their bones and oil.
It's a fine start, but I feel like your story is missing a couple of key ingredients:
1) The concept is fine, but flawed in some key ways. Unless you're an established writer, no one is going to want to make a high-budget monster disaster movie. It'll be too expensive. These movies tend to be heavy on spectacle, light on substance, and there's nothing wrong with that, but in order to get your foot in the door, you'll need to write a story that...
A young woman hopes a treasure bails out her failing spaceport. She joins space pirates bound for an asteroid and encounters danger and romance from a young scoundrel. “Treasure Island” in space.
Lord Malcolm continues to capture Jedi from across the galaxy which causes Master Oscar and his Padawan Connor to go into hiding on the Planet Soiven. Meanwhile Master Marc Kena and his Padawan Chelsea Wilson search for the ancient Jedi and Sith scriptures before the Empire finds them
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