Overall, I really liked this. I cared about the characters and I'm very intrigued by what's really going on. I feel that the opening scene could go on for just a little bit longer just so you get us to really care about the characters and maybe include that flashback earlier so it's more devastating when David and Oliver are lost later. That's really the main feedback I have because I thought everything else was superb and great for a tv pilot so...
A man who desperately tries to keep himself away from humanity is forced back to his old town when the news finds him that his brother has passed away. Having to go back and face some demons along the way.
A camera guy decides to follow the day to day life of a proud and eccentric motel manager, when a mysterious drifter rolls into town disrupting the manager's routine life.
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