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BÊTE NOIRE short

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#Horror

Slimy creatures haunt a young man's life, what to do?

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1 Reviews | 16 pages | 6 years ago | Draft 1
A young man seeks professional counselling to help him deal with the black beasts that haunt his daily existence.

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The concept is interesting although I didn't like the ending part.
Plot is fair.
The first few pages kept me interested. I want to finish.
The protagonist is interesting but could be better.
The scenes are well written.
Format is top notch.
Not many errors. I give you that.
Dialogue is good.
Climax is where I have a bit of a problem. The ending wasn't satisfying at all.

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