Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
A disgruntled cult exile hatches a plan to bring down his former community with the help of a young, gay escapee who he’s inadvertently seduced, while the cult’s sociopathic leader and a loser cop, in way over his head, try to stop them.
In a cyberpunk post-Brexit Britain where crime, poverty and nationalism reign supreme, a jaded but honourable ex-soldier becomes embroiled in a network of international plots as a pair of warring factions fight for control of the former United Kingdom, and with it, the world.
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