Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
It is up to the Retired CIA Agent David Storm and Ex Navy Seal Jason Rightton to find and kill the terrorist group who kidnapped the president daughter and stop them from releasing the nukes.
Under British-ruled Ireland, Irish Catholic servant Reanna O’Neil is forced to flee for her life when, in self-defense, she kills her attacker, a British noble. His son-in-law, hot on her heels and out for blood, will stop at nothing to “Make the Irish slattern pay!”.
During a business trip in Manhattan, a successful Swiss banker develops a romance with a much younger, naive bellhop while struggling to keep her violent fantasies from becoming reality.
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