Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
After hiring a genealogist to trace his Nigerian ancestry, a billionaire in the midst of a hostile takeover becomes entangled in a conspiracy which forces him and his estranged son to confront evil security contractors.
A disgruntled cult exile hatches a plan to bring down his former community with the help of a young, gay escapee who he’s inadvertently seduced, while the cult’s sociopathic leader and a loser cop, in way over his head, try to stop them.
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