Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
When four college students go missing, a young intelligence operative is thrust into the most confusing and downright disturbing case she's ever had the (mis)pleasure of working on. But is reality all it seems?
After his estranged mother passes away, a man named Gary Arthur goes on a murderous downward spiral, all the while hiding in plain sight, and mystifying investigators.
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