Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
In a cyberpunk post-Brexit Britain where crime, poverty and nationalism reign supreme, a jaded but honourable ex-soldier becomes embroiled in a network of international plots as a pair of warring factions fight for control of the former United Kingdom, and with it, the world.
When four college students go missing, a young intelligence operative is thrust into the most confusing and downright disturbing case she's ever had the (mis)pleasure of working on. But is reality all it seems?
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