Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
When Benji doesn't have an explanation for the things happening to him, he believes the only logical answer is that monsters are causing everything bad in his life
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