Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
A rural mother fights an alien hive growing under her farm after it attempts to merge with her teenage son—igniting a battle that threatens to reshape life on Earth.
Carrie's week is going miserably and camp doesn't seem to help. Neither does the fact that there's a killer loose on the campgrounds hellbent on being remembered by his childhood bullies.
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