Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
When a morally grey defense attorney’s dying brother gets arrested for arson in gentrifying Oakland, he must test his own definition of "right" while detectives uncover the truth behind the fires.
Squabbling siblings, in search of their long-lost parents, take a house-sitting job in the countryside, only to find they've been lured into a trap by a wicked witch.
An Iraqi woman, whose family was killed by U.S. soldiers, must help the F.B.I. find the terroists from the fifth 9/11 plane before they can attack the U.S.
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