Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
When four problematic couples spend a weekend on Lover’s Lake, they are faced with the terrors of the urban legend, Skinned Tom, a skinless man who punishes cheaters by flaying them.
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