Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
Amid a cycle of mysterious family massacres, an 18-year-old running a roadside motel must, within hours of a haunted guest’s suicide, save her family from a vengeful spirit or kill them herself.
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