Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
When a strange seductress moves to a historic villa, an esteemed gentleman must set his decorum aside to stop the curse devouring all the men of Birmingham
A hitman is tasked by a mobster to retrieve stolen cash from the cartel, and has to make it back across the border to stay safe... (old and incomplete)
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