Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
When the elite S.T.A.R.S. team crash lands outside the mysterious Spencer Estate, they may have just found what is responsible for the cannibalistic murders plaguing Raccoon City.
A small-town reporter suspects his copy editor's a former high school classmate with a new identity in a witness protection program. Her cover is inadvertently blown, a mob boss she helped convict vows revenge and the reporter and staff protect her.
A hitman is tasked by a mobster to retrieve stolen cash from the cartel, and has to make it back across the border to stay safe... (old and incomplete)
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