Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
A disgruntled office clerk who dreams of anything better accidentally joins her ex-underwear model client on a cross-county crime spree, only to fall for him while climbing the most wanted list.
Sam, a directionless teenager on the fringes of Galway’s music and party scene, watches the world around her corrode — friendships, bodies, and belief systems melting into one blurred noise.
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