Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
A nuclear physicist is discretely contracted by an infamous anti- terrorist organization to formulate and manufacture an anti- terrorist weapon that turns his world into a nightmare, as he must abide to terrorist demands to save his family.
A disgruntled cult exile hatches a plan to bring down his former community with the help of a young, gay escapee who he’s inadvertently seduced, while the cult’s sociopathic leader and a loser cop, in way over his head, try to stop them.
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