The Disclosure Paradox: Part One - Arcturian Mission feature
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A UFO researcher accompanies a psychic Native American woman on a cross-country trip that evolves into a rescue from a malevolent race of aliens.
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111 pages |
3 years ago
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Draft 3
A middle-aged, flawed UFO blogger and researcher goes on a dynamic cross-county journey of self-awareness after meeting a spiritual-psychic Native American woman while attending a conference. The woman convinces him to accompany her to her reservation where anomalous activity occurs. On the way they meet other people with links to the site. What start out as an innocent excursion out of curiosity evolves into a quest to find what is behind the secret at Jicarilla Apache reservation in Dulce, New Mexico.
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Two super psychics, a military expert, a ufo expert, and a woman whose baby was abducted join together to free abducted children and destroy a reptilian/human base in the process is an excellent concept. Unfortunately, the story lacks a compelling protagonist. I believe Captain Silvani is the protagonist or maybe Mary Ellen. It's hard to say because there is no growth in the characters. The characters need to start out in one place internally and...
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First of all, I want to say that I'm very picky when it comes to science-fiction. Normally, I try to stay away from this particular genre as often as I can. Just to be clear, I can appreciate people who love science-fiction, it's just I'm very picky with the sci-fi genre. Some of the greatest movies and television shows ever made are science-fiction. However, the logline of this script grabbed my attention. So, I decided, what the heck, I'll...
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