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#Crime #Comedy

A retired contractor with tax problems discovers a buried treasure he's been living above for years.

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2 Reviews | 89 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 1
A retired contractor with tax problems discovers a buried treasure he's been living above for years.
***WARNING***SOME SEXUAL CONTENT***

Industry Reviews


All in all, I thought this was a solid script yet again from you and I hope my feedback will help you with future edits. Good luck!

Peer Reviews

Overall, this story isn't essentially bad; it only needs a second draft. The philosophical conflict is almost enough, and the concept works quite well. The structure is the only one that needs to be improved a little more; ensure the resolution concludes the story and you're more than halfway there.

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