Overall, this story isn't essentially bad; it only needs a second draft. The philosophical conflict is almost enough, and the concept works quite well. The structure is the only one that needs to be improved a little more; ensure the resolution concludes the story and you're more than halfway there.
A hired thief accidentally kills a beloved superhero during a robbery gone wrong, and has to pretend to be him, in order to ensure his freedom and reunite with his daughter.
A prison inmate sustains a brain injury at the hands of a corrections officer and is diagnosed with amnesia. He enters therapy to restore his memory and begins to wonder if he was wrongly convicted.
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