Overall, this story isn't essentially bad; it only needs a second draft. The philosophical conflict is almost enough, and the concept works quite well. The structure is the only one that needs to be improved a little more; ensure the resolution concludes the story and you're more than halfway there.
Four friends stumble upon a fortune following a seemingly trivial encounter with a French mobster. The violent game of cat and mouse that ensues changes their lives forever. How far will one go for Blue Diamonds?
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