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#Sci-Fi/Fantasy #Romance #Drama
A time traveler starts to lose his memory when someone alters his timeline
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123 pages |
1 year ago
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Draft 1
John is a time traveler by birth. He learns how to use his powers alongside his brother from their dad. It's a tricky business, learning how to control a curse.
I understand there are problems with my story and I am reworking the structure and order of events as well as stories issues that come about. I still would appreciate feedback on this current draft so as I am rewriting, I can incorporate your thoughts as well. I truly appreciate anyone who takes the time to do this, thank you.
I understand there are problems with my story and I am reworking the structure and order of events as well as stories issues that come about. I still would appreciate feedback on this current draft so as I am rewriting, I can incorporate your thoughts as well. I truly appreciate anyone who takes the time to do this, thank you.
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A story about time travel is a tricky tale to tell. The concept was executed well, but there is certainly room for improvement. The dialogue really shines through in this story, but the plot needs some work. All in all, I would recommend this screenplay to anyone who likes a good sci-fi story. Especially those with an interest in time travel.
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