The concept is interesting although I didn't like the ending part.
Plot is fair.
The first few pages kept me interested. I want to finish.
The protagonist is interesting but could be better.
The scenes are well written.
Format is top notch.
Not many errors. I give you that.
Dialogue is good.
Climax is where I have a bit of a problem. The ending wasn't satisfying at all.
A young man lives alone in an empty house, currently stuck in the middle of an endless blizzard. A mysterious, yet accommodating stranger intrudes on his solitude to escape the storm, soon making his intentions known.
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