This is the first draft to my first screenplay and I would like unbiased criticism to judge how much more I need to touch it up and add, thank you.
John has been surviving on his own ever since an outbreak of chronic wasting disease killed most of the people around him. He has lived with a "kill or be killed" mindset until he helps a woman with a child get away from a cruel dictator. Now this dictator and his army hunt them throughout the city as they struggle to survive.
In an alternate timeline of WW1, six German soldiers are trapped in the trenches near Cairo, where they must wait for help as they fight off against the psychotic Ottoman soldiers doing anything they can to make the Germans suffer.
Coveting the endless gravitational energy of a black hole, a group of scientists will use quantum physics and Andean myths to access a black hole in another dimension. What comes from there is more than that.
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