This is the first draft to my first screenplay and I would like unbiased criticism to judge how much more I need to touch it up and add, thank you.
John has been surviving on his own ever since an outbreak of chronic wasting disease killed most of the people around him. He has lived with a "kill or be killed" mindset until he helps a woman with a child get away from a cruel dictator. Now this dictator and his army hunt them throughout the city as they struggle to survive.
An awkward teenager trying to cope after his father's tragic death moves in with his uncle’s family. When a new black family moves next door, the teenager witnesses the family eat someone, the teen believes the neighbors are not like us.
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