This is the first draft to my first screenplay and I would like unbiased criticism to judge how much more I need to touch it up and add, thank you.
John has been surviving on his own ever since an outbreak of chronic wasting disease killed most of the people around him. He has lived with a "kill or be killed" mindset until he helps a woman with a child get away from a cruel dictator. Now this dictator and his army hunt them throughout the city as they struggle to survive.
A family on the brink of collapse tries to reconnect at a quaint Bed and Breakfast for the weekend, but a supernatural evil in the house has other plans.
When a serial killer inexplicably saves a suicidal man she intended to kill, she decides to train him into the art of being a serial killer to give his life some form of meaning.
Fake ghost hunters must prove the ghost behind "The Man With Hell's Eyes" photo is real so they can receive a million dollars from their network before one of their own dies of cancer.
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