Exterminators is a series based off of the experiences of one of my closest friends. We follow Doug, who is an exterminator in his mid 30s who is struggling with feeling trapped in this life. In this pilot he is called to an older couples house to deal with a skunk infestation.
The major issues I noted in the script were three-fold: Structure, Motivation, and Stakes/why should I care.
First, as you've detailed this is a comedy pilot, comedy pilots are...