Rebellion

Aiden Van Dyke

After society has fallen into another "Great Depression" an evil politic called The Dead takes control of the country and taking control of everyone lives. This leaves many to try and rid themselves in The Dreads plan, but sometimes it's not that easy.

I'm looking for some feedback on the story of the script rater than my writing style, punctuation, grammar etc. This is only the first draft of the screenplay so I myself don't think its brilliant that is why I've put this online looking for some feedback while I go back and edit the story myself. I'm aware that some things may not make sense to the reader and it's just in my head but I hope for some productive feedback on the story so I can further improve this script.

Sci-Fi/Fantasy

18 pages