Overall, this script covers no new ground and becomes increasingly frustrating to read as the poor dialogue and messy story structure snowball into what I can only describe as an unfortunate mistake if I am trying to be somewhat polite. For this script to be more successful, it needs to find a way to discover some originality in its genre, tighten up the plot, and really hone in on developing the characters.
It is up to the Retired CIA Agent David Storm and Ex Navy Seal Jason Rightton to find and kill the terrorist group who kidnapped the president daughter and stop them from releasing the nukes.
When a test pilot is chosen by an ancient force to protect the universe, he’s thrown into a war. As he struggles to find his place among aliens and god-like beings-- such as the Guardians of the Universe-- he’s forced to confront the weight of legacy, loyalty, and leadership.
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