Overall, this script covers no new ground and becomes increasingly frustrating to read as the poor dialogue and messy story structure snowball into what I can only describe as an unfortunate mistake if I am trying to be somewhat polite. For this script to be more successful, it needs to find a way to discover some originality in its genre, tighten up the plot, and really hone in on developing the characters.
When John can't stop thinking about his breakup with Janie two years later, he decides to travel back to the past to prevent them from ever breaking up in the first place.
A young man who lives and works in the beautiful but rigid city of Gobbelmore discovers a shocking truth – that the city’s utopian society is a lie and the mirage is sustained with smoke and mirrors.
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