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By Abdirizak Hirsi

An Indian-American wrestler who becomes a superhero.

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1 Reviews | 119 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 2

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Rani learns about the malicious plan inducted by the secret organization and she has to stop this before it's too late.

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A mostly unoriginal story that can’t juggle its many plot points and characters

Overall, this script covers no new ground and becomes increasingly frustrating to read as the poor dialogue and messy story structure snowball into what I can only describe as an unfortunate mistake if I am trying to be somewhat polite. For this script to be more successful, it needs to find a way to discover some originality in its genre, tighten up the plot, and really hone in on developing the characters.

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