Overall, this script covers no new ground and becomes increasingly frustrating to read as the poor dialogue and messy story structure snowball into what I can only describe as an unfortunate mistake if I am trying to be somewhat polite. For this script to be more successful, it needs to find a way to discover some originality in its genre, tighten up the plot, and really hone in on developing the characters.
NY Storms hockey team was once a dynasty, but now bottom-rung franchise for decades. When the owner decides to hire untested manager, roster changes set up Storms for run at the legendary Wellington Cup.
Peter Pan, a boy who won't grow up, takes three Edwardian children with him to a magical island full of pirates, fairies, and mermaids; an island where children are always at play.
After posing as a pro reporter to receive information, a young asthmatic African American must escape annihilation and run the story to expose the corrupt policy of European business consortium in Africa.
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