Overall, this script covers no new ground and becomes increasingly frustrating to read as the poor dialogue and messy story structure snowball into what I can only describe as an unfortunate mistake if I am trying to be somewhat polite. For this script to be more successful, it needs to find a way to discover some originality in its genre, tighten up the plot, and really hone in on developing the characters.
After a young woman is kidnapped by a group of women traffickers, a mixed group of gunfighters, bounty hunters, a former Union Colonel and a sheriff go on her search. Things will complicate even more when they must decide what to do with the other victims of their cruel enemies.
In the 16th century African State of Dande, a zealous young warrior must learn to work with a sworn enemy if he is to prevent the demise of his people.
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