Overall, this script covers no new ground and becomes increasingly frustrating to read as the poor dialogue and messy story structure snowball into what I can only describe as an unfortunate mistake if I am trying to be somewhat polite. For this script to be more successful, it needs to find a way to discover some originality in its genre, tighten up the plot, and really hone in on developing the characters.
A young man who lives and works in the beautiful but rigid city of Gobbelmore discovers a shocking truth – that the city’s utopian society is a lie and the mirage is sustained with smoke and mirrors.
The first conscious humanoid robot flees its creator’s illegal lab, evading the relentless pursuit of darkly competing Government and Corporate forces and a powerful Artificial Intelligence control system, discovering its personhood and inspiring the world to a brighter future for all.
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