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The Dukes of 1010

short
By Caleb Densman
Comedy,Crime

3 freinds, one who's fed up with an awful boss, one who wants to get the girl, and one with nothing better to do take matters into their own hands

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Peer Rating: 20%
Industry Rating: N/A
1 Reviews | 6 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 1

Summary

3 friends, Nicholas, Thomas, and Colin, decide to rob Thomas' boss, but this won't just be any type of robbery, no. these cunning and witty men are going to steal his favorite pen, why? because pen's aren't worth anything so they won't end up in jail. or will they?

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Peer Reviews

The story is simple and COULD have potential. But we don't get to know any of the characters -- they're all cardboard cut outs. Hard to discern one from the other, no distinct traits or ways of speaking.

Also, we spend a lot of time on William Sutton, giving him that grand introduction to his framed picture on a wall. But where was the picture hanging? His only purpose was to inspire the three friends to rob Thomas's boss of his pen.

I do l...

1 year ago | read more...
Michael Kospiah Top Reviewer

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