I was surprised this rough-cut gem hasn’t already been reviewed. In the span of ten pages, this script crafts the framework of character development, a fairly good plot, and an unexpected but satisfying ending. This script could definitely become more extensive and well worth the effort of a rewrite.

Unfortunately, the script is riddled with punctuation, spelling, missing words, and formatting errors. This may be the reason it wasn’t reviewed...

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