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Tree Witch

short
By Simon Parker
Sci-Fi/Fantasy

A desperate father visits a witch who has been chained to a tree, begs for the life of his child. Hopes that she will use her magic, but she demands a blood oat in return.

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Peer Rating: 27%
Industry Rating: N/A
1 Reviews | 4 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 1

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A short screenplay - 4 pages.

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Peer Reviews

While this is an interesting and novel idea, this doesn't really have a satisfying narrative because nothing really plot-like happens and no-one learns anything.

John doesn't deserve his fate because he's done what almost any parent would do. Such a horrible death is usually only dished out on morally reprehensible characters (outside of slashers and torture porn). It needs to be earned by John being more of a bastard, or compromising his mora...

1 year ago | read more...
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