My primary inspiration for this script are tarkosvky's movies and their very special ambience. I would like you to imagine this script as a Tarkovsky movie so that you can maybe understand it. I really hope that I can get feedback, my english isn't perfect and I hope this isn't going to disturb you while reading it. I know this isn't a summary but whatever, Thank You to everybody that took the time to read my script.
Is the Concept strong/original?
It's original, I don't think I have seen something similar to it anywhere.
Does the logline/first ten pages draw the reader?
Yes, the first few scenes draw me into the story.
Are scenes well-written?
I think the script is a bit short. Why not adding more scenes showing his boring daily...