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1 Reviews |
11 pages |
7 years ago
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Draft 1
The story takes place overnight at the golf club and includes the dialogue between the two main characters, JK and SANJAY.
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Concept is not good. Plot is good. The characters are real. The dialogue is a thumbs up. The action seems real enough but would have been better if there is conflict.
Climax is good.
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