Concept is not good. Plot is good. The characters are real. The dialogue is a thumbs up. The action seems real enough but would have been better if there is conflict.
Climax is good.
A family of three goes to the beach for a day. As day progresses, we watch the family gradually grow older, forcing the Mother to come to grips with reality of time...
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