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Fenix 2132

By wokensheep

In a futuristic Africa, albino Ayo finds himself the target of multiple pursuers as the potential key to curing a deadly virus.

Peer Rating: 67%
Industry Rating: N/A
Draft 4: 67%
1 Reviews | 99 pages | 2 months ago | Draft 4


The Girl with all the Gifts meets Black Panther.

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I will be focusing on format and style here rather than story. The first fifteen system to catch these issues doesn’t seem to work well simply because many of the reviewers are making the same mistakes as the authors. I urge everyone to invest in a hard copy format manual. The internet is no substitute.

I can see you building a rich world here. These kinds of fantasy scripts can be trickier to sell because you’re asking so much more of the rea...

2 months ago |
Matt Gorman Top Reviewer

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