Start: good, easy to follow up - clear idea of the role of the main character, her position in society.
Script structure: great to follow, plot twist with good ending. Make sure you stick with the script structure, sometimes it is a little too narrative. You should only write what we see/hear - not the characters thoughts. 'Our heroine' no need to put that. ' 'Surpassingly she is more calm' - > no need to say 'surprisingly'
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A college student is forced to take 8:00 AM classes for the first time in his life. He soon learns, however, that the consequences of sleep deprivation are far more serious than he could have ever imagined.
The spirit of a murdered girl, angry at a Detective’s failure to bring her killer to justice, holds the man’s wife hostage in an attempt to force him to exact her revenge on the killer, while he must find a way to save his wife without losing his own soul.
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