Start: good, easy to follow up - clear idea of the role of the main character, her position in society.
Script structure: great to follow, plot twist with good ending. Make sure you stick with the script structure, sometimes it is a little too narrative. You should only write what we see/hear - not the characters thoughts. 'Our heroine' no need to put that. ' 'Surpassingly she is more calm' - > no need to say 'surprisingly'
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In a rain-soaked city, Kaleb's exchange in a dark alley triggers a year-long spiral of mysterious deaths, ominous symbols, and a chilling connection to an ancient mirror, forcing Jeremy and Pearl into a shadowy world of malevolence and sacrifice.
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