I Hate the Rain short
#Horror
By
Elijah
Olsen
Strange things start happening in a rainy town after Thomas's mother dies
Awards
Approved
Summary
2 Reviews |
12 pages |
5 years ago
|
Draft 1
When Thomas's mother dies, he begins seeing some strange things, including a terrifying face that appears seemingly at random, named "Andrew Uy".
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There are several things I don’t understand about the storyline; consequently, I couldn’t connect with your main character, Thomas. After reading it several times, I still can’t say I grasp the story you’re trying to tell—but that’s me.
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This short story is a good start and has the potential to be much better. There are a lot of technical errors throughout the entire script. Most noticeably are the "SCENE ONE, TWO, etc." headings. I encourage the writer to review scripts online that have been produced as a way to understand the proper format. Characters are introduced with too little description and also improperly formatted. The overall dialogue is a little bland and stunted, th...
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