Lois Lane used to want to save the world, but now it seems like it doesn't want to be saved. Just when she's about to lose all hope, Clark Kent comes into her life. All at once, she must unravel the mystery of this man's abilities, convince him that the world needs him, and find reason to have hope again. Meanwhile, powers that be will do anything possible to maintain the status quo.
In many ways, it reminded me of Ang Lee’s 200...
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There were many good things in your opening pages. I’m drawn in to see what happens to the boat crew. In the first 10 ages we see glimpses of a man who can fly and has incredible strength. This already gives me a glimpse into a mythos of Superman/Kal-El from Krypton.
The dialogue is crisp and to the point.
Pg. 2 Barry holds the rail, and he cries for help. This jars against the parent...
While the story itself is not original, the scenes were written with a different tone. Clark is an employee at a coffee shop versus the reporter we all have seen...