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The Stream

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By Kurtis Ratliff
Comedy

A group of friends on a camping trip take a bet too far.

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Draft 2: 60%
0 Reviews | 20 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 3

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A group of friend on a camping trip take a bet too far.

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So, the premise is ridiculous. Yet, somehow, the writer was able to take a very dumb premise and make it interesting with fun dialogue and by raising the stakes, thus somehow making the otherwise silly premise seem important. The characters, although not entirely unique with their own distinctive voices, do have goals -- specifically Geena and Mark. And those goals evolve and somehow hinge on this silly "little" bet about whether or not one of th...

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