You're Not All There Is
Darren is bullied by an abusive father. Inexplicably, he begins to transform.
Darren has been made to feel like someone other than himself from an early age. Instructed and bullied by a toxic father figure, his worst nightmares become reality as he begins to transform. With all sense of reality starting to slip, Darren has to fight for the identity he holds so dear. If he doesn’t, he will be eaten whole by an ideology that threatens everyone. For Darren and boys just like him, time is running out.
At it’s heart, you could describe the concept as a character study of a troubled man with a dark history. But it’s much more original than the way it is on the page, through the non-linear structure, use of surrealism and unreality that it was fascinating to...
1. Concept - The concept isn't anything too original. I feel like you got some heavy inspiration from the 2012 movie, Chronicle, especially in the sense of there being an abusive alcoholic dad and a young boy who can't handle the abuse and later gets superpowers. However, that ending...