I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
When a young waitress, an aspiring chef, unlocks a magical gift, the ability to open portals through her cooking, she must follow the clues left by her deceased father to repay the debt he owes a vengeful real estate shark, one that threatens the lives of her mother, brother and her.
When a high school theater troupe stages The Phantom of the Opera, the students unknowingly unravel dark secrets tied to the tragic death of a former starlet, whose mysterious fate is linked to the very play they're performing.
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