I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
When her boyfriend is lured to Hollywood by a shadowy film company, a woman follows—only to find herself unraveling in a world where the line between family, fiction, and control begins to blur.
Roy Carson awakens from a sixty day coma and can't remember the face of the man who shot him and left him for dead. He gets a friendly reminder from a serial killer now terrorizing the city.
When a revolutionary neural interface designed to enhance lives and provide unparalleled convenience is hijacked for sinister purposes, a determined programmer must confront the system’s flaws—and her own grief over a tragic loss—to stop it from enslaving humanity.
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