I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
In the 1950s, a neurotic florist's strict routine is derailed after stumbling across a murder scene, and he's thrust into a conspiracy only his all-consuming obsession can unravel.
A mythology professor with OCD begins to shed his repetitive routines, but when monsters invade his gated community, he suspects his neurotic behaviors may actually be rituals intended to ward off an ancient supernatural force.
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