I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
After his estranged mother passes away, a man named Gary Arthur goes on a murderous downward spiral, all the while hiding in plain sight, and mystifying investigators.
After hiring a genealogist to trace his Nigerian ancestry, a billionaire in the midst of a hostile takeover becomes entangled in a conspiracy which forces him and his estranged son to confront evil security contractors.
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