I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
In a small city in the Rocky Mountains, a young police detective from a nearby tribal reservation--half Native, half white--struggles with the local racial politics and her self-identity as she hunts a serial cop killer whose modus operandi is a bow and arrow ambush.
In the 1950s, a neurotic florist's strict routine is derailed after stumbling across a murder scene, and he's thrust into a conspiracy only his all-consuming obsession can unravel.
At his family's secluded vineyard, a restaurateur must outwit a sociopathic wine expert, solve his father's murder, and rescue his fellow guests, after a tasting event turns into a deadly game of revenge.
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