I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
When James receives an unexpected letter from his lost wife, he sets off to find her in "their special place," a trip that quickly turns into a waking nightmare of twisted monsters.
In 1922, A lonely man rides back home for Christmas on a cold dark woods. He is forced to take a diversion where he meets a woman who maybe not what she says.
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