I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
When a revolutionary neural interface designed to enhance lives and provide unparalleled convenience is hijacked for sinister purposes, a determined programmer must confront the system’s flaws—and her own grief over a tragic loss—to stop it from enslaving humanity.
When a test pilot is chosen by an ancient force to protect the universe, he’s thrown into a war. As he struggles to find his place among aliens and god-like beings-- such as the Guardians of the Universe-- he’s forced to confront the weight of legacy, loyalty, and leadership.
When a high level black excutive is hired racism ensues. After he is falsly charged with embezlment he turns the tables on the company. He uncovers almost 18 million dollars in funds stolen funds from the nations police departments.
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