I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
When an adopted twenty-year-old gets a letter informing her that she may have inherited fifty million dollars after the death of her birth father, she is sent off to an old mansion in the woods and must compete in a series of tasks and riddles in order to win the estate and family inheritance.
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