I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
A traumatised ex-soldier, awakes stranded on a space station with six strangers, their memories wiped, orbiting a star about to explode in a deadly supernova. To escape, he must unravel a dark mystery in a frantic race against time.
An ex-con tattoo artist is hired to ink seductive beauties, but when the newly illustrated models turn up dead, he must solve the mystery, clear his name, and evade a corrupt cop on his tail.
After his estranged mother passes away, a man named Gary Arthur goes on a murderous downward spiral, all the while hiding in plain sight, and mystifying investigators.
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