I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
Amid a cycle of mysterious family massacres, an 18-year-old running a roadside motel must, within hours of a haunted guest’s suicide, save her family from a vengeful spirit or kill them herself.
A family, along with their son’s best friend, move from Florida to Puerto Rico, and have to adjust to their new lives. Along the way, they make friends, as well as enemies, form relationships, and learn the secret about why their father moved them to the island.
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