I think I’ve already spoken all my thoughts story is solid but the formatting of the screenplay ruins everything. If you want to keep your descriptions write a novel instead.
An immature restaurant worker is recruited by a local Detroit fast food to run armchain s for the Israeli Militia in Iraq and Kuwait. He is persued by a lofty interpol agent who is seeking some evidence against the Mexican cartel in his jurisdiction.
When a high school theater troupe stages The Phantom of the Opera, the students unknowingly unravel dark secrets tied to the tragic death of a former starlet, whose mysterious fate is linked to the very play they're performing.
When James receives an unexpected letter from his lost wife, he sets off to find her in "their special place," a trip that quickly turns into a waking nightmare of twisted monsters.
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