Stranger short

Reading this script turned out to be a real pain. I kind of liked the story and the gradual revealing
of what the heck was going on, but it was a real fight to get through it all.
The imagination this author has is comprehensible, I can clearly see what is meant to be seen.
But it is written in an overload of information, plus all the camera stuff is just a pain.

What I don't like - what NOBODY likes - when reviewing a script is being told...