A soon-to-be queen of her tribe has been obsessed with finding her mother ever since she disappeared in search of a place known as the Field of Dreams. She finally sets out to find her and the field of dreams, and when she reaches her destinations she's met with a stark reality.
I hope these references and examples will help,
Jack (aka DRayVan)
FORMATTING ISSUES: Details below
• SCENE HEADERS
• CHARACTER INTRODUCTIONS/DESCRIPTIONS
• DIALOGUE: On-the-nose; spoon-feeding the audience
• DIALOGUE: Parentheticals – Several examples