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A down-on-his-luck aspiring actor and an assassin must team up to stop doomsday.

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PERFORM (Remake WIP) by Cyle Brooks

#Drama #Horror #Thriller

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Interesting story.

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Victor Titimas 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

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Genre: Action/Adventure

A down-on-his-luck aspiring actor and an assassin must team up to stop doomsday.

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Victor Titimas 1 year ago

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Genre: Drama,Horror,Thriller

Rating: 67%

Overall, I enjoyed reading this script! Just make sure it doesn't turn into a "talking heads" movie. The dialogue is a bit on the nose. Try changing it a bit. I also think you introduced us to many characters, but we don't get to spend a lot of time with them, to get to know them better. It's like you're so passionate about the story, that you want to let it all out at once. I know the feeling!:) I think the brutal murders can be reworked to be less graphic, to suit a younger audience, but it's up to you to decide:) Good luck with it!:)

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Victor Titimas 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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Genre: Drama,Horror,Thriller

A group of high schoolers are stalked by a maniac obsessed with music who kills through the style of music videos

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Victor Titimas 1 year ago

just joined ScriptMother!

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