Stephan Nielsen

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An autistic marine biologist’s analytical brilliance is put to the ultimate test as her team faces off against a colossal octopus in a treacherous underwater cave system.
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Stephan Nielsen 9 months ago

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Shane said

Thank you for your feedback, Stephan. I appreciate your insights and will consider them during the rewrite. I have a question about your comment on pacing. You mentioned that some scenes seem rushed while others move too slowly. Could you specify which scenes you felt were too slow and which were too rushed? You can either email me (my address is at the beginning of the script) or leave your notes here if you prefer. If not, I understand. Either way, thank you for the review!


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Stephan Nielsen 9 months ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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Mystery Can short
Genre: Animation,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
In a dystopian near future, a man goes to great lengths to acquire food, but his food wants to kill him.

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Stephan Nielsen 9 months ago

uploaded a script.

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Genre: Horror
An autistic marine biologist’s analytical brilliance is put to the ultimate test as her team faces off against a colossal octopus in a treacherous underwater cave system.

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Stephan Nielsen 9 months ago

just joined ScriptMother!