I really enjoyed reading this script. You have a distinct and unique way of writing and I respect that. You have provided a three dimensional feel to James Bond, M and the other side characters. However, this is where it falls short of its potential, if you are planning to make a short film, then this will be a good foundation. But if you are thinking of making a feature length, I think it will be best if you take time to develop your characters instead of rushing it. The dialogue is interesting but I have seen many Spy films that have similar style to it. I’m not saying that’s bad but if you want your story to stand out, you need to add more substance to it. Overall, it was a joy reading this script and I hope you make this into a film as I would definitely pay to see it. All the best!