Marion Donnellier

Marion D.

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My Little Girl

My Little Girl Draft #3 short

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Charles is excited to welcome his darling daughter to his office until an attorney shows up, accusing his firm of sexual harassment.
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The Creature

The Creature Draft #1 short

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When a socially anxious university student is offered a place in the synchronised swim team she worries it will reveal her terrible secret.
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Wild Things

Wild Things Draft #1 short

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A stubborn university student, missing her life at home sees her world spiral when her long-time boyfriend shows up unexpectedly.
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Marion Donnellier 2 years ago

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My Little Girl cover image
My Little Girl short
Genre: Comedy,Drama
Charles is excited to welcome his darling daughter to his office until an attorney shows up, accusing his firm of sexual harassment.
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Marion Donnellier 2 years ago

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My Little Girl cover image
My Little Girl short
Genre: Comedy,Drama
Charles is excited to welcome his darling daughter to his office until an attorney shows up, accusing his firm of sexual harassment.
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Marion Donnellier 2 years ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

My Little Girl cover image
My Little Girl short
Genre: Comedy,Drama
Charles is excited to welcome his darling daughter to his office until an attorney shows up, accusing his firm of sexual harassment.
MarionDonnellier profile pic
Marion Donnellier 2 years ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

My Little Girl cover image
My Little Girl short
Genre: Comedy,Drama
Charles is excited to welcome his darling daughter to his office until an attorney shows up, accusing his firm of sexual harassment.
MarionDonnellier profile pic
Marion Donnellier 2 years ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

My Little Girl cover image
My Little Girl short
Genre: Comedy,Drama
Charles is excited to welcome his darling daughter to his office until an attorney shows up, accusing his firm of sexual harassment.
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Marion Donnellier 2 years ago

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SELFIE STICK short
Genre: Comedy,Drama
Rating: 60%
Overall I enjoyed your story. The concept is very current and interesting. The story works as well as the character of Ken. The main problem for me was the flow. We were too often taken out of the story because of elements included in the description that shouldn't be there. We only need description or action lines, everything else takes us out of the script. For example, things like "Everyone else is at home streaming Netflix” or “Losing isn’t a thing that he does.” Either show us a scene where people are watching Netflix or remove it because the audience won't see that line if that makes sense. With a little bit more work on that and on the secondary character, your script would work even better. Good work and good luck!
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Marion Donnellier 2 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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SELFIE STICK short
Genre: Comedy,Drama
Two friends go hiking and use a selfie-stick. Narcissism loses in the end.
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Marion Donnellier 2 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming cover image
007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
When Bond is just a teen, he does not expect his life to change.
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Marion Donnellier 3 years ago

uploaded a script.

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Wild Things short
Genre: Drama
A stubborn university student, missing her life at home sees her world spiral when her long-time boyfriend shows up unexpectedly.
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Marion Donnellier 3 years ago

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The Creature short
Genre: Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When a socially anxious university student is offered a place in the synchronised swim team she worries it will reveal her terrible secret.