Screenwriter with a B.A. in Theory and Practice in Cinema: Screenwriting.
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I liked this script. I think with slight tweaks to some scenes and some formatting/action line edits, the script will be even better. The characters are going through really relatable things like loss, not fitting in and wanting more out of life.
This has good potential with some tweaks. Curious to see how the characters grow and change.