Jordan Tyler

Jordan T.

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Jordan Tyler 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

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Flame Episode 1 television
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Animation,Action/Adventure
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Jordan Tyler 2 years ago

completed a review for

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Spaceman short
Genre: Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Comedy
Rating: 73%
As mentioned before, the big thing is just making sure to make your motifs and themes crystal clear, at least if they revolve around major plot points. There are some spelling and grammatical errors but just go back and read your work carefully and you should be able to spot those, or else you could just run a proofreading program on the computer to make sure that things are right. Also, it is worth mentioning that this script does not necessarily need to be a complete blueprint of how the film will look, but simply needs to describe the story beats. No need to include too many details about the cinematography unless they are absolutely crucial to the story. Overall, I just want to know, why did you write this piece. What it the lesson that you want people to learn from it? These are crucial to keep in mind as you write. Overall, I like the story, I think it could make a great short film, and kudos. Keep doing what you do!
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Jordan Tyler 2 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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Spaceman short
Genre: Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Comedy
An agoraphobic man finds a space helmet which seems to get rid of the things he fears, only for him to become dependent on wearing the helmet.
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Jordan Tyler 3 years ago

just joined ScriptMother!