John Oglethorpe's profile

Let me first start out by saying that sexual assault is a very important and serious topic and so the examination of such is a good concept that is really hot right now in movies and literature. With that said, I’ll start with what needs work as that seems like why you would submit for your work to be read. I didn’t really love the character of Alicia. While I couldn’t exactly pinpoint what was wrong it seemed like she just wasn’t real and that her emotions fluctuated too much to the extremes. Speaking of extremes, that’s what Peter and Spencer were. Peter was extremely good and Spencer was extremely bad. Benoit also wasn’t too developed which mas a little bit of sense because he’s not even as secondary character. Th dialogue didn’t sound super realists. What did work in the screenplay was the story. It was short but the suspense when they went to the club was effective. The story followed the typical literary structure which made it easy to follow.

MAIN MENU

John O.

Ranking

Reviewer Rating

Scripts

Reviews

SCREENPLAYS

Reviews

Les Touristes by Ulysses Macargen

Sign In to see % Rating

Following

Activity

John Oglethorpe 3 years ago

Les Touristes short

John Oglethorpe 3 years ago

Les Touristes short