Gene McCallister

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Gene McCallister 5 months ago

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Biltmore Pilot: Joey's Race television
Genre: Comedy,Family,History
Rating: 80%
Overall I would love to see this series develop. I like the characters, the setting, and definitely the period! It was funny, charming, and very well done! I like the idea of the story. A person trying to be in 2 places at once; however, I would have explored this idea further. There was no sense of urgency or panic really. I really do love the idea of Joey using a customer's car to enter a race. But we never actually witness him crashing the car during the test drive.. and I thought that Henry actually drove the car. I would for sure clear up the confusion. The arc with Joey's sister was okay. But I believe there could have been a little more development with that. Same with Frank Stanley. All and all.. the pacing was a bit off.. and the story was a tad convoluted. But it most definitely has potential to be something great. And I definitely would love to read more, or even better, see it in action!!
GeneMcCallister
Gene McCallister 5 months ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Biltmore Pilot: Joey's Race television
Genre: Comedy,Family,History
Following the daily life of garage owner Joey Biltmore and his friends and family in 1950s New York City.
GeneMcCallister
Gene McCallister 4 years ago

uploaded a script.

The Motionless (Unfinished) feature
Genre: Horror
What can't move but seems to be everywhere?
GeneMcCallister
Gene McCallister 4 years ago

just joined ScriptMother!