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Red by Joshua Almonte

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super short and boring

Hide and Seek by i n

#Drama #Family #Comedy

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Eh, not my fave.

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Erez Bailen 9 months ago

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Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Action/Adventure,Family

James Jones is a kid whose life and adventures are imaginatively interesting.

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Erez Bailen 9 months ago

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Red short

Genre: Animation

Rating: 33%

No idea what to say, just too short to understand why this all happened. try to add character development before and during the scene... Trying to find a way to not sound like a dumb movie critic here, but it seems that this is how I feel reading this. so short, how can I give 150 word feedback? Find a way to expand the story, cause right now it's blatantly obviously lazy. NO idea what to say? please write a second draft and if it's long enough, might be great. I don't know what else to say, excruciating is what the reading was... It's not as harsh a review as most critics would give, I promise.

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Erez Bailen 9 months ago

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Red short

Genre: Animation

Normalize the topic of entering the menstrual cycle in a young teenage girl's life

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Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Action/Adventure,Family

James Jones is a kid whose life and adventures are imaginatively interesting.

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Erez Bailen 9 months ago

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Hide and Seek short

Genre: Drama,Family,Comedy

Rating: 33%

I found it to be in poor taste... no judge would ever allow visitations to a woman like that, Darrin would have heard the commotion and ask what it was. not say may I speak to Barnabus, It might be that he asks what is happening and what the noise is and she could say lawn work outside or something, then he'd ask to speak to their son. if a stink bomb went off, someone would have heard it, like a neighbor or something. Hard to really give a good critique, if it was a comedy, didn't find it too funny... It was not the worst screenplay I've read, but from the best. Needs work and length made it rushed.

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Hide and Seek short

Genre: Drama,Family,Comedy

An irresponsible mother is granted visitation but her estranged son prefers separation from her.

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James Jones is a kid whose life and adventures are imaginatively interesting.

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