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CHRISTOPHER MCLOUGHLIN 10 months ago

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Waiting Room short

Genre: Drama

Family tensions come to a head while waiting for a loved one to return from surgery.

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CHRISTOPHER MCLOUGHLIN 1 year ago

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Genre: Horror,Crime

Sometimes violence is the only answer

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CHRISTOPHER MCLOUGHLIN 1 year ago

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Dear Clementine, short

Genre: Drama,Romance,Comedy

Rating: 27%

The issues I wrote about in the inline critique sum up what's wrong with the screenplay. I would concentrate on the spelling issues and the format issues. I'm not saying it's bad, it just needs work. If you stretched out the story it would be better. It's hard to invest in a character with such a short script. I understand that you are making the most out of a few pages, but I think you can make it tighter. Honestly, it's really hard to get past the formatting issues. Maybe if those were cleaned up the story would flow better.

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CHRISTOPHER MCLOUGHLIN 1 year ago

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Dear Clementine, short

Genre: Drama,Romance,Comedy

Months after his girlfriend leaves him, our protagonist attempts, trough trial and error, to write her a letter for closure

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CHRISTOPHER MCLOUGHLIN 1 year ago

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Genre: Comedy

Rating: 80%

For the most part, this script was perfect. Not a lot of constructive feedback. I would flesh out Tara, and make the heist less predictable. Other than that I don't think you need to change anything.

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CHRISTOPHER MCLOUGHLIN 1 year ago

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Genre: Horror,Crime

Sometimes violence is the only answer

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CHRISTOPHER MCLOUGHLIN 1 year ago

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Genre: Horror,Crime

Sometimes violence is the only answer

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CHRISTOPHER MCLOUGHLIN 1 year ago

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Genre: Comedy

A down on his luck storage worker sets out to steal a horde of cash suspected to be in the unit of a shady televangelist.

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CHRISTOPHER MCLOUGHLIN 1 year ago

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Genre: Horror,Crime

Sometimes violence is the only answer

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