Alfredo Bravo de Rueda

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5 months ago
Humanity's Last Hope television
Genre: Comedy,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Action/Adventure
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I found the characters a bit stereotypical and I would’ve liked to know what the mission was about in the first 15 pages. But the concept could be promising if it turns into a micro cosmos of society. That would also give the story an original tone that I can’t see yet in the first 15 pages. The characters are supposedly selected because of their skills but then, even when this is not their first try according to the script, they still don’t seem to consider character and temperament, what could give us a better idea of the characters as a contrast with the profiles while they develop through the story. The best characters are those who subvert our expectations for some good reason to which we didn’t pay enough attention from the very beginning. On the other hand, the characters’ expressions through the dialogues is consistent though. Defining the mission early in the story would also give me an idea of what that society considers threatening or what is missing and is trying to recover through the protagonists. It would also help a couple of good jokes, considering this is a comedy, in the first 15 to give an idea of the kind of humor I should expect in case I decided to read the rest. Not all kind of humor appeal the same way to everybody. Then, with respect to the environment, if we are talking about a society with a more advanced technology, we should be able to show a credible evolution of that technology. It’s a comedy. It doesn’t have to be Asimov or have the science references of the X-files, but it’s important to lure the reader into believing into this world before surprising him/her with the funny parts.

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5 months ago
Humanity's Last Hope television
Genre: Comedy,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Action/Adventure
Logline: In the not so distant future a retired Marine officer hell bent on completing one last mission, leads a group of reformed criminals against an impending alien invasion on the dark side of the moon.
Alfredo Bravo de Rueda uploaded a script.
6 months ago
Stupid Death feature
Genre: Comedy
Logline: Eugene is a serial killer wannabe but all his intended victims die accidentally due to their own stupidity. Stupid Death is a parody of the 80s slashers with a bit of XXI Century political humor.
Alfredo Bravo de Rueda uploaded a script.
6 months ago
Emptiness feature
Genre: Horror
Logline: Coveting the endless gravitational energy of a black hole, a group of scientists will use quantum physics and Andean myths to access a black hole in another dimension. What comes from there is more than that.
Alfredo Bravo de Rueda uploaded a script.
2 years ago
Gatito Inmeegrante - Episode 3 television
Genre: Drama
Logline: Against impossible odds, Gatito will try to change the unjust law that has condemned him and his loved ones to a hopeless life. As this happens, a governor obsessed with scapegoating immigrants rises to power, corrupting institutions and targeting Gatito himself.
Alfredo Bravo de Rueda uploaded a script.
2 years ago
Gatito Inmeegrante - Episode 2 television
Genre: Drama
Logline: Against impossible odds, Gatito will try to change the unjust law that has condemned him and his loved ones to a hopeless life. As this happens, a governor obsessed with scapegoating immigrants rises to power, corrupting institutions and targeting Gatito himself.
Alfredo Bravo de Rueda uploaded a script.
2 years ago
Gatito Inmeegrante - Episode 1 television
Genre: Drama
Logline: Against impossible odds, Gatito will try to change the unjust law that has condemned him and his loved ones to a hopeless life. As this happens, a governor obsessed with scapegoating immigrants rises to power, corrupting institutions and targeting Gatito himself.
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Against impossible odds, Gatito will try to change the unjust law that has condemned him and his loved ones to a hopeless life. As this happens, a governor obsessed with scapegoating immigrants rises to power, corrupting institutions and targeting Gatito himself.

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Against impossible odds, Gatito will try to change the unjust law that has condemned him and his loved ones to a hopeless life. As this happens, a governor obsessed with scapegoating immigrants rises to power, corrupting institutions and targeting Gatito himself.

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Against impossible odds, Gatito will try to change the unjust law that has condemned him and his loved ones to a hopeless life. As this happens, a governor obsessed with scapegoating immigrants rises to power, corrupting institutions and targeting Gatito himself.

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Emptiness
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Genre: Horror
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Coveting the endless gravitational energy of a black hole, a group of scientists will use quantum physics and Andean myths to access a black hole in another dimension. What comes from there is more than that.

Stupid Death
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Genre: Comedy
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Eugene is a serial killer wannabe but all his intended victims die accidentally due to their own stupidity. Stupid Death is a parody of the 80s slashers with a bit of XXI Century political humor.

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